Gorgeous camera work! Excellent color and tone! Good rhythm! Ominous soundtrack! This is very well conceived and executed. My only two critiques are with the shot of the girl in the circle of light and the end shot. All the other shots of the girls are shrouded in perfect darkness and mystery. In the circle of light you give too much away. It reads as make-up and not fear. The close shot is tilting up and feels great but it cuts so abruptly. Let it play out. Excellent work!
Gorgeous camera work! Excellent color and tone! Good rhythm! Ominous soundtrack! This is very well conceived and executed. My only two critiques are with the shot of the girl in the circle of light and the end shot. All the other shots of the girls are shrouded in perfect darkness and mystery. In the circle of light you give too much away. It reads as make-up and not fear. The close shot is tilting up and feels great but it cuts so abruptly. Let it play out. Excellent work!
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